Username It's a bit sappy... It doesn't quite fit you on one level, but it does on another. It's alright. 4/5pts
Layout Nothing wowed me, but at least it didn't make me wanna click the x on the corner. It does what it's supposed to. It's a good function, but if you wanted to razzle dazzle me, there was a lot of other things that could've been done... Simply put, it's average. 16/20pts
Content I'm not sure if it was because I haven't reviewed in or awhile or what, but your diary kept my attention up for a really long time. A whole whopping 2 hours before I finally decided to start writing. Even after these two hours, I think I could've continued to read more before I started writing this review. The only thing that really bugged me was your Neopet plugs. I hate neopets (personal opinion) and a diary shouldn't be a place to plug things, my personal opinion. Besides that, a lot of the things you talked about I could relate with. Though my childhood was nothing like yours, I experienced a lot of the emotions you did. I was never homeschooled but I went to a different elementry school every year and because of that I didn't make a real friend till 6th grade. Anyway, your low self esteem problems and things like that, I could all relate to it very well. I admire your honesty in your diary for I cannot reveal some of the things you said that I too have done. I'm a pretty moral/ethical person and I noticed that you cheated on your boyfriends a lot. Normally this would bother me, but knowing where you came from, it made it easier for me to be okay with it. Your experience with Jeremy also reminds me of my experience with an individual as well. I didn't think your diary was going to be very promising when I read your latest entry. It seemed boring and dull, but somehow when I kept reading more of your entries, it got more and more interesting. You write very humbly (if that makes sense) and I guess you tell it like it is. I don't think you should listen to that other review (honestlyou) who said that you shouldn't abruptly talk about something else in the middle of the topic. I think sometimes there's a reason why we do that and it should be taken into account. In the end, it's your diary and even though we're giving our opinions, I still say you should write however you want to. I found that your diary was really easy to read and I liked the way you wrote. I don't think you should change anything (except the neopet plugs, lol). Remember that the world is so vast and filled with so many different kinds of people, you can only reach out to a certain number of them. Write for what kind of people you'd like to have read your diary, not for a bigger audience. 39/40pts
Navigation Your navigation was the thing that annoyed me most. You have diaries everywhere and it seems really disorganized. Perhaps it may be because I haven't looked in depth to everything on each website, but if I'm looking for only one thing, I don't want to dig through it all, you know? 3/5pts
Errors Typos everywhere... but it fits your personality and I didn't mind for some reason. 9/10pts
Contact Be prepared to be stalked. 5/5pts
Updates I'm amazed that you're still writing. I'm giving you an extra point. 6/5pts
Extras Too much crap. You're a whore. 5/5pts
Revisit More than likely. 5/5pts
Analyst Comments Q. Why are most of the pictures of you whore-ish? and Thank you, I'm not depressed anymore.
Total Score 92/100
You have been analyzed by Anna
November 25, 2005 7:12 p.m.
