Username I really liked it, it pretty much gives me an idea on your outlook to life. It would sum up some of the bitterness you carry. 5/5pts
Layout My first impression was *yay* I'm not going to get lost in this diary. I really liked the simplicity of the layout and the skull gives it a little more zing. Everything was very easy to read and it's very humble and not begging for attention! 20/20pts
Content I absolutely love it! Your writing is so sincere and simple yet very thought provoking. I think anyone could read your diary and relate to most of what you are saying, one of my favorite lines in your diary is "It's hard to swallow at first, but after a while, you get used to being exactly like everybody else." I have to say you're one of the best writers I've read in a long time and that includes even better than some of my own personal favorites. I did however get a little confused when you would make references to "him" and "you" I think aliases may work if you're worried about someone you know finding your diary. Other than that you read like a good novel, I just kept hitting that 'previous' button, kept wanting to read more. Your writing is truly a gift, I think you have a knack for it and can see you studying arts of writing. Of course I'm not a fortune teller, just an analyzer but I think if you did that it would come second nature to you. Now giving you almost all the points make me look like a push over, but I can't help it. 35/40pts
Navigation Very easy to get through and see, I did however not like the FAQ opening in a new window, I don't understand why you have another diary for that. But other than that it was perfect. 4/5pts
Errors You have a couple sentence fragments here and there but they are completely intended to be there, without them it wouldn't give the entry that taste of feeling you have. A few more commas could have went in to play but I've noticed you use more in recent entries than older entries. Eloquent link was not working, dead link are ugly.7/10pts
Contact Email and IM were available but I had to go searching for it (even though I understand your reasoning for not posting it), you could always put EMAILREMOVETHIS@yahoo.com, and search engines would not pick up on it. I think the email should be easily accessible, most people won't take the time to go looking for it. The notes were nice and easy to find, so that was good. 2/5pts
Updates You have definitely got better at updating this past year.5/5pts
Extras The only thing you have is your FAQ's and review links. Pretty lame, but a point for each. 2/5pts
Revisit I�m going to go ahead and give you a "yes" ^_- ! 5/5pts
Analyst Comments You were a great read! And remember no criticism is bad if it's constructive.
Total Score 85/100
You have been analyzed by Sommer
July 18, 2005 10:38 p.m.
